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__**Thesis Statement**__ Although women in the 1920s didn't have many rights, they still fought for them because it was the fair and responsible thing to do.

__**Revised Thesis Statement**__
Even though in the 1920s women didn't have many rights, they still went through the struggle to fight for them because it is unjust to treat people differently according gender.

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